Good job. I wonder what your definition of sin is. Most people have a different opinion on that. Do you feel that hate is sin. Murder is sin? Where is the line drawn? Oh dear, I need to stop. Great job, only thing is that I think you should have done "then things are going to get even worse" instead of "worst".

Nice poem. . . it really opens the shitty eyes of today's superficial people. . .

x/ Hell Phoenix /x

Wow... I feel that way a lot. Well-done, again.