I want to know what happnes next. This is good, easy to relate to. I love how she is talking to her own reflecton and it will always be there and watch her make more bad choices. I love it. Great job!

Another great installment! I can't wait to know what comes next! ...There's gonna be more right? There HAS to be more!

*No, I'm not demanding at all :) Whatever would make you suggest such a thing?* ;)

You've got a few typos in here, but other than that, this is so heartbreaking and so very realistic. Tragically beautiful.

Uh oh. Now she is going to be put into a mental hospital. Maybe there won't be any mirrors there. Ha, sorry, that wasn't very nic, was it? Well, this was short, but good. I think you meant "But you can't stop me now, not now" putting the "stop" in there. Or maybe you didn't mean the "me". I don't know. Great job though.