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| MeaningAwaits 2008-05-18 ch 2,  | o switching with the pov kewl and very original... I love it wen people do that... newayz pretty nice story line! |
| Cupid's Jinx 2007-12-11 ch 5,  | Oh My Holy Carlisle Cullen. Update. Soon. Please. This is amazing! I beg of you. Melt that writers block. Please?!? Love it all! Lyra -x- |
| Sydney 2007-12-09 ch 5, | Hilairious! Didnt expect her to kiss him but the funny thing was that he didnt relize it till a little later because he was too busy with his ego lol those two are so funny together hope you get some ideas soon |
| mickeyyearbook 2007-12-09 ch 4, | hahaha that was hilarious! good luck w/ the writers block and i hope you can update soon b/c this story rules! |
| madda8lynn 2007-10-12 ch 4, | i really like this story! its so cute |
| Entice 2007-09-17 ch 4, | Awesome! update soon! |
| Snowplum 2007-09-16 ch 4, | i loved it.keep writing |
| Firaa the Fallen Guardian 2007-09-16 ch 4, | I missed this story! And Dash's oh-so-funny/wrong comments. xD Keep on writing, this chapter was a great laugh. |
| vivling 2007-09-14 ch 4, | please update! i'm begging you! i'll even give you cookies! |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-07-18 ch 3, | Amazing story so far, I love it! It's so funny! Can't wait for more, update soon!! |
| chinx 2007-01-31 ch 3, | haha! i love this story! especially how you tell it from first POV. It makes things so much more interesting. Anyways, update soon! |
| Definition 2007-01-31 ch 2, | One word, or statement, rather. LAMO. Woops. I spelled that wrong... Now, with a bit of editing... LMFAO! Rosen's internal thoughts are very intriging xD Gotta love some of these lines... "Sure it was sexy in a scary-she-really-could-kill-me, kinda way." "Ow! **, she doesn’t hit like a girl." "What can I say, I love challenging women." "** off Rosen. Go make out with a cactus Rosen. You’re a ** ** Rosen. Blah, blah, blah, but I tell you I love it when she gets ** like that." Gotta have a few laughs at that ! Nicely done, again. I havn't the time to read Chap. 3 at the moment, but I WILL read it the moment I have some spare time. Just a few picky things... Some dialogue was confusing as to whether WHO was speaking. Overall, it was pretty much cleared and obvious. And this line... "“I swear, if you do not shut up, I will have it so you can’t remember you’re name Rosen.”" If I remember correctly, it should be corrected to the following: "...so you can't remember your name's Rosen." Again, keep up the awesome work :D Ahh...my heart now gives a great leap and shout whenever I see a new chapter... -Definition |
| Firaa the Fallen Guardian 2007-01-30 ch 3, | Okay, I do like evil characters, I've decided. That seems like something my male characters always do in my light-hearted stories (A.K.A. stories that don't get posted. :D) And poor Rox. Everyone must be staring right now. xD Loved it. |
| Apiavva 2007-01-30 ch 3, | Hilarious... It is a little confusing though...I get confused with who is talking sometimes though... |
| Firaa the Fallen Guardian 2007-01-26 ch 2, | Never mind liking Dash. But, in a way, his baiting Rox is amusing...and slightly likable. Dammit! /Bangs head on a desk/ Anyway, great second chapter. I love it and hope you post another one soon! |