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| Brinneh 2007-01-23 ch 1,   | i agree. i love the format of this poem, it's like the vodka is telling a dirty little secret in the parentheses. |
| H.F.S.Sargeant 2007-01-23 ch 1, | I love the use of Oxymorons. The contradicting of the lines really makes you think about the two opposing opinions towards alochol. Perhaps the thoughts of a teenager as they are considering using alcohol? I like the way you've clearly got across the point that Alcohol is (I qoute, The Simpsons) "The cause of, and soloutuin to all of Life's Problems." 98% - I look foward to more material from you :) |