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| princessarielle3 2008-08-28 ch 11,   | sweetness. Right more or i will combust. seriusoly :P |
| princessarielle3 2008-08-27 ch 3, | Great Love ur story. Really intreasting |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-02-29 ch 2, | I like the second chapter. I can tell romance will blossom between Alyssa and Cole. I love the name Alyssa by the way! It's always been a favorite of mine. Good idea for a story! |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-02-29 ch 1, | Ooh, I can just imagine the drama with a girl at an all boys school! And the boys going crazy for a girl at their school. Everyone would want to date her! Haha. Sounds like a good story :) |
| Living.My.Life.My.Way 2008-02-21 ch 11, | haha. i like this story. and i havent only reviewed it once. =D i have no idea what my name was, but i still go with what i said before. i think the relationship is a little too rushed. but hey, what girl doesnt run into a relationship once n a while? great story. please update soon. |
| mia5081 2008-02-18 ch 11, | Oh, update soon! ~Mia |
| Cayden 2008-01-25 ch 11, | love your story! update soon plez! |
| SummerBaby94 2008-01-20 ch 11, | Maybe Justin and Alyssa could go to the beach or something for a date. Great chapter! |
| Inkhearts and Inkstains 2008-01-14 ch 11, | I can't wait for more. Please update soon. |
| XxXTwinkle-ToezXxx 2008-01-13 ch 11, | im so glad you updated! keep it up =) |
| Sultana of Freaking Romania 2008-01-13 ch 1, | lol yo this is funny! |
| Alexa'sAppleTree 2008-01-13 ch 11, | Phew! I thought Jared would get all over-protective-brotherly lol. great chapter update soon =D |
| Alexa'sAppleTree 2007-12-17 ch 2, | omgogmogmomg this is like so cool. I use to live at San Diego and my name's Alyssa and my friends do call me Lyss haha what a coincidence xD I'm loving this story so far |
| Amanda 2007-12-04 ch 11, | I love your writing, and though I haven't said anything about the last 10 chapters, it seemed ideal to just review after I read them all. Then I can sum it up into one. Oh crap, I'm babbling.. Anyways, I hope you don't stop writing, and congrats on being 14(I think by now you are already fourteen, but I haven't been looking at dates >>) Anyways, I'm surprised you're so good at writing, since you're only 13/14(no offense, just a lot of girls your age aren't very good - it's a good thing I'm surprised :D) Anyways, love the story, and the characters, never stop :D |
| sdavis2k 2007-09-06 ch 11, | I really liked the story I read, so if you plan on improving it great, but try not to over analyze it too much. I know some people who are not happy unless a story accounts for every second of a characters day, me personally I think it should highlight the interesting parts. Anyways excellent story so far and good luck with your rewrite. |