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Reviews For: Scars: Scattered Memories

Firefly Shadow
2007-03-27
ch 7,
This was really interesting. And the ending was really fitting! (And I can definitely see why you loved the ending.) It's too bad that it's over though...

And I still don't see how this connects to Scars but... I suppose that if I read and reread a thousand times I'll figure it out eventually. Or not, you never know.

I was going to say something else but I can't remember what... I hate my bad memory... Well anyways I hope you write more (brilliant) stories soon! And hopefully your writers block will go away soon! --Firefly Shadow

P.S. Oh and thanks for reviewing Tainted Soul! I really do appreciate it.
Firefly Shadow
2007-03-18
ch 6,
...And you have no idea how much I love you either!! And please ignore me being over dramatic...again. I'm on a caffeine high...again!

You shouldn't worry about the shonen-ai thing so much. I'm a yaoi fanatic anyways so it doesn't really bother me. Besides you did say that there's slash in the summary...kind of.

And Akira is getting sneaky! I thought that bit between Gabrielle and Lloyd was funny. And the part where Lloyd was flirting with Steve was really cute!

...And this review is starting to get really long... But whatever, right? Besides bigger is better! Or am I thinking of something else?

And do you have any idea how great it is that you have already finished this story! And I hate writers block... But then again most probably do...

This review is starting to get really long... So I probably should end it... (that and I'm running out of things to say!!) So I hope you get over your writers block soon! (Since I can't tell you to update soon since you just updated!!)--Firefly Shadow
Firefly Shadow
2007-03-18
ch 5,
You know I never know what to say after I finish reading something interesting. Especially when you leave it off like you did this chapter. But thats okay I guess since I've noticed that you have already updated! Anyways I'm off to read the next chapter! --Firefly Shadow
Firefly Shadow
2007-03-17
ch 4,
I hope you realize that you are a really great writer. I really can't think of much to say actually. I just... love your characters because they are so original! So anyways I'm off to read the next chapter! --Firefly Shadow
Firefly Shadow
2007-03-17
ch 3,
Hm, this chapter has gotten me really interested. I really like how Akira can see things through other people's point of view. That is something I haven't seen before.

So I'm off to the next chapter then! --Firefly Shadow

P.S. I'm sorry that I said I was going to read this chapter sooner but didn't! To tell you the truth I'm very easily distracted.
Firefly Shadow
2007-02-26
ch 2,
Raine and Akira are sisters?! That wasn't something I was expecting... This chapter is even more interesting then the last! But I'm still not sure how I feel about it... Maybe I'll find out next chapter. So I'm off to read it then! --Firefly Shadow
Firefly Shadow
2007-02-26
ch 1,
This is interesting... Not to sure what I think about it just yet but its interesting. Well I'm off to the next chapter to see where exactly your headed with this... --Firefly Shadow

PS. I'm sorry it took me forever to get around to reading this... And thanks for reviewing Tainted Soul! I really appreciate it!
akiyare
2007-02-24
ch 4,
that was so sad cloud but still beautifully written. but i wish there was more to it im still a bit confused. what is it that arandis wants more than anything and why cant he have it? is he in love with akira? Does raziel really love raine? i really liked it anyways, please write more! (so i can understand a little better too).
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