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| she smolders 2007-02-28 ch 1, | It scares me that my dreams sometimes mean more to me then my real memories. The feelings I get from this break my heart. It's lovely. |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2007-01-25 ch 1, | Ahh goregous piece. This one is actually very refreshing. Nicely done, I think it's one of your best.Ah…this reminds me of all the dreams I’ve had. |
| poetic abortion 2007-01-23 ch 1, | A love story really. I love it; the boy is such a sweetie and the girl--I presume is you--is so real. I love how they talk about scars--I took it as both physical and emotional, but we all know how wrong I often get with my assumptions XD--and her utter RAW, somewhat broken, appeal she has; the boy, to me, just wants to piece her back together. Aw. ♥ The first line, "i dreamt of him", makes me think this is a fantasy, a false-world-thing-that-is-in-my-head or something, I just feel that this is some tragic never-ever happaned type-thing that just BREAKS you after reading it because, you know, it's such a tangable wish. Oh. I think I love this just a bit more than I initially did. It's gorgeous. - Noelle |