 poetic abortion 2007-01-23 . chapter 1A love story really. I love it; the boy is such a sweetie and the girl--I presume is you--is so real.
I love how they talk about scars--I took it as both physical and emotional, but we all know how wrong I often get with my assumptions XD--and her utter RAW, somewhat broken, appeal she has; the boy, to me, just wants to piece her back together. Aw. ♥
The first line, "i dreamt of him", makes me think this is a fantasy, a false-world-thing-that-is-in-my-head or something, I just feel that this is some tragic never-ever happaned type-thing that just BREAKS you after reading it because, you know, it's such a tangable wish. Oh.
I think I love this just a bit more than I initially did. It's gorgeous.
- Noelle |