Reviews for Kerosene flavored ice cream felt

Osunale 2007-01-23 ch 1,	Nice poem with a lovely flow...it's wonderful to see the rhyming pulled off so well that I almost didn't even notice that it was there. The rhyme blends into the words, as it should. I particularly like "kerosene flavored ice cream" and "she stares with negative print eyes."
Nathan Ridge 2007-01-23 ch 1,	o-k...i'm too tired at the moment to truly comprehend this, but is at a metaphor for a detestation of people? if so, I'm sorry I bothered you.