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| AK the Twilight 2007-03-15 ch 1,   | This essay is short, but all of it is a well-done insight as to humanity and community. If you can expand upon the concept more, this would no doubt be a stellar essay. And even now, despite a few grammar mistakes (I think you meant "cease" not "seize") it's definitely intriguing. Excellent job, overall. |
| jenforvel 2007-01-23 ch 1, | You've hit every point perfectly. I don't depend on anyone, because of the fact that when I've put my trust into someone else's hands, they've only thrown my trust to the dirt... then stepped on it...then spit on it... you get the point. I don't trust, or depend, or rely, or any of that, with anyone, when it comes to the things that make up who I am. I wont, no, I can't trust again like I have before. Trust is so delicate- once it's been broken, it's virtually impossible to regain... I'm getting into my own history only because your piece has made me react. Great Job. -Jenforvel |