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| AppLEaves 2008-12-01 ch 1,   | I don't usually drop reviews, but I felt I had to tell you how much I liked your writing. - I love the way you integrate a little fantasy into the real world and flawlessly too. (Although the 'strange angel' phrase sort of disappeared at the end.) - The flashbacks were short, concise and nice enough to create just the right amount of suspense (something I happen to suck at) - Your last sentence was just awesome. Period. I guess I should thank you for letting me able to read this? |
| Awe 2007-09-01 ch 1, | Oh...this is gorgeous. Found it by accident and I'm so glad I did! I loved how the past was interspersed with present, how you described Jerry and his thoughts and just--everything. Jerry and Sean's last lines of dialogue were /perfect/. |
| Totoro-chan 2007-07-06 ch 1, | Wow. That was really great! I loved the premise of the story, and the way you arranged it was fantastic! I would love to see more oneshots set in the same universe! |
| in2lalaland 2007-06-15 ch 1, | Ok, so I didn't read the summery. There for I almost stopped reading when I came to; That might have had something to do with his tail. "Tail? Oh, no it's one of those story's." I never read fantasy or fantasy inspired fiction. (I overdosed on it years ago.)But I liked you writing so I kept reading. And what do you know. It was a really nice story. I think I'm going to read some more of your work now. |
| aj plante 2007-06-09 ch 1, | I am very surprised that your story has a mere 3 reviews. It is fantastically written and has such a touching storyline, with a very interesting twist with the idea of the 'strange angels'. I find it rather unfortunate that this was a one-shot. If you ever need inspiration to write another one, be sure that I will read it and love it. I look forward to reading your other stories. |
| nasake-suneku 2007-01-26 ch 1, | Amazing ^_^ |
| Anagashai 2007-01-25 ch 1, | I really like this. It's well written, can't wait to read more. |
| rif4ever 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Cool... Very good, and very original. It sorta reminds me of a cross between David Levithan and Scott Westerfield... *lol* My 2 favorite authors. |