NO! MORE PLZ! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! But you didn't give any details about how they get together! NOO!!
One more chapter?
Lee

I don't usually drop reviews, but I felt I had to tell you how much I liked your writing.

- I love the way you integrate a little fantasy into the real world and flawlessly too. (Although the 'strange angel' phrase sort of disappeared at the end.)

- The flashbacks were short, concise and nice enough to create just the right amount of suspense (something I happen to suck at)

- Your last sentence was just awesome. Period.

I guess I should thank you for letting me able to read this?

Oh...this is gorgeous. Found it by accident and I'm so glad I did! I loved how the past was interspersed with present, how you described Jerry and his thoughts and just--everything.

Jerry and Sean's last lines of dialogue were /perfect/.

Wow. That was really great! I loved the premise of the story, and the way you arranged it was fantastic! I would love to see more oneshots set in the same universe!

Ok, so I didn't read the summery. There for I almost stopped reading when I came to;

That might have had something to do with his tail.

"Tail? Oh, no it's one of those story's." I never read fantasy or fantasy inspired fiction. (I overdosed on it years ago.)But I liked you writing so I kept reading. And what do you know. It was a really nice story.

I think I'm going to read some more of your work now.

I am very surprised that your story has a mere 3 reviews. It is fantastically written and has such a touching storyline, with a very interesting twist with the idea of the 'strange angels'. I find it rather unfortunate that this was a one-shot. If you ever need inspiration to write another one, be sure that I will read it and love it. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Amazing ^_^

I really like this. It's well written, can't wait to read more.

Cool... Very good, and very original.
It sorta reminds me of a cross between David Levithan and Scott Westerfield...

*lol* My 2 favorite authors.