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concerto49
2007-07-26
ch 1,
I would have preferred you used some formatting to separate the title and by author, e.g. bold.
Yes, you do make a point - often things are simply forgotten, but has not disappeared.
There are some good ideas there.
Cool. Anyhow. Cheers.
Catcher in the Rye
2007-04-21
ch 1,
Thanx so much for reviewing Mirage! I absolutly adore this poem because I find myself relating to this most of the time. its simply amazing. FAVOURITES!
Wolf Ravensoul
2007-04-16
ch 1,
Wow. Great poem. Looks like you put a little of your soul into that one. Take comfort in the knowledge that you are not alone and that sometime in the future that the fog lifts and the living ghosts lonely song will stir the hearts of the many. I enjoyed the poem and look forward to reading more of your works. Keep writing. TTFN.
Cheers
Wolf
Princess-anna57
2007-02-01
ch 1,
Wow, well written. This has a really well constructed rhythm. Excellent work. I can totally understand. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing (also, thank you for reading and reviewing my poem!)

~Anna~ ^_^
SirScott
2007-01-25
ch 1,
It is a terible feeling to feel alone. The poem really does capture the essence of being lonely.

~SirScott
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