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| a silenced revolution 2007-04-08 ch 1,   | The title caught my eye. I think maybe I'll try writing something called "my eulogy" sometime. What a dark and interesting title. So, moving on to a constructive review: Sad and beautifully written. I like this. Keep writing! |
| Wowingglow 2007-02-20 ch 1, | It's rather creepy, but really awesome. The idea's really cool, too. |
| paradiie 2007-02-11 ch 1, | Deep.:) I guess writing helps you explain things you can't demonstrate with speech. |
| Awen1923 2007-02-07 ch 1, | Truly an interesting topic. Very descriptive and emotional. You had some good lines - "yet that winged-demon of light missed, skipped a beat" really stuck out to me. |
| midnights-daughterMD47 2007-01-27 ch 1, | This is deep. Graphic a little yes, but nothing I can't handle. Very good. You do have a good talent! Midnight |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-01-26 ch 1, | Wow, pretty graphic, but I see how its not a suicide note. More of self-evaulation if you have died. |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-01-25 ch 1, | This left me speechless. I couldn't tear my eyes away. This is amazing! I understand this completely. I feel like that a lot. "the silence drove her crazy; lead her to the deed which cemented her insanity and in a sick, twisted way made her feel complete." I love those lines. Adding to favorite stories and C2! Thanks for reviewing! ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Princess-anna57 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Wow, very descriptive indeed. The way I like it. :) Always be positive, and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |