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| George O' Bradbury 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm telling ya, that Aphrodite is one EVIL lady...but this is a great story! (a little short, but great...) |
| Vixen of Vienna 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! You were not lying. Short and quite direct. Um, I like it for its brevity though you could have made the story of Clytie and Helios more poetic ... It is really a lovely tale if handled correctly, but that is often hard to do .. Anyways, I shall shut up. It is good. |