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servatis-a-pereculum
2007-04-16
ch 1,
Beautiful and sad! I counted the syllables to make sure you weren't misleading me... ^^;;
sleeping Pisces
2007-03-19
ch 5,
This one is really touching. Maybe it's just because I'm listning to Bohemian Rhapsody, but I could really feel the emotion in this haiku. Very well written.

Daze
sleeping Pisces
2007-03-18
ch 3,
I actually laughed out loud at this one! This is more than saddness, it's tragedy. Awesome haiku!

Oh, and yeah, I am pretty Australian. Too right, mate.

Daze
ode to a firefly
2007-03-17
ch 5,
...like watching Shea get ready to go to France...

=(

I wish I had money.

♥Christine
sleeping Pisces
2007-03-16
ch 2,
I like the simple way people can relate to this. Another amazing haiku.

Daze
sleeping Pisces
2007-03-16
ch 1,
Bloody fantastic. I also really love the title. Great work.

Daze
lights over sounds
2007-03-16
ch 5,
All the things you wrote was so true. Very nice haiku.
salafrae
2007-02-16
ch 1,
i really like this one.
very emotional.
nice job.
Shadows in the Fire
2007-02-08
ch 1,
Aw...too true...
Rovandin
2007-02-07
ch 1,
So true. Like it. To the point.
back row dancer
2007-02-02
ch 4,
For some reason, this made me think of Scottish Bagpipes rather than the melodies of Ireland. I love this haiku series, they add a little humor to (in addition to shedding some light upon) the small despairs of life.

Best wishes.
back row dancer
2007-02-02
ch 3,
Did you ever hear that one Dido song remixed? It was horrible. I can't remember it at the moment, but I expect that's a good thing.
back row dancer
2007-02-02
ch 2,
I am so tired of winter. I'm tired of the snow and cold. I wish I could just magically transport myself to Jamaica or something. Cute haiku! ^_^
back row dancer
2007-02-02
ch 1,
I agree. I hate those lonely, late nights. I also hate having to do stuff by myself... it just isn't any fun.
boys kiss girls
2007-01-26
ch 4,
it is, in fact, quite possible to be homesick for a place you've never been before.

damn it.

i wanna go to ireland.
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