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| lazy ever be 2008-02-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh the plot thickens!! Tony had something with the charming swinger!! and not only that, but Jackie-poo has a WIFE. A living one!! Next thing you know, Sofie's fiance will track them down and bring the mafia straight to their door. Dammit... i liked Tony. |
| Amindaya 2007-08-08 ch 2, | abuseVery, very interesting idea and setting...but you really need to put a space in between each paragraph, so that the text isn't all smooshed together, because it's hard to read this way. |
| Ever Be 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI'll move into your drom room. Just feed and clothe me and I'll provide you with inspiration. *grin* I like this one, I can't wait to see the next chapter to this one... I think I'd like it better if you were reading it to me though. You should seriously consider taking on a job reading those books on tape. Hells yeah. lol. talk to you later. |