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Reviews For: Accelerating Pulse

lazy ever be
2008-02-13
ch 3, anon.
abuseoh the plot thickens!! Tony had something with the charming swinger!! and not only that, but Jackie-poo has a WIFE. A living one!! Next thing you know, Sofie's fiance will track them down and bring the mafia straight to their door.

Dammit... i liked Tony.
Amindaya
2007-08-08
ch 2,
abuseVery, very interesting idea and setting...but you really need to put a space in between each paragraph, so that the text isn't all smooshed together, because it's hard to read this way.
Ever Be
2007-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI'll move into your drom room. Just feed and clothe me and I'll provide you with inspiration. *grin*

I like this one, I can't wait to see the next chapter to this one... I think I'd like it better if you were reading it to me though. You should seriously consider taking on a job reading those books on tape. Hells yeah.

lol. talk to you later.
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