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| JadeDream 2008-11-26 ch 10,   | ooh poor Jay! cant wait to read the next chapter and see what happens!! |
| benozir 2008-11-26 ch 10, | that was an awesomEE @! chap! |
| AlijaS117 2008-11-25 ch 10, | yay you are finally uploading i can't wait to read more! update soon |
| CelticLady 2008-11-25 ch 10, | Hey I just wanted to say that I love your story and can't wait until the next update! |
| chocolatechipash 2008-11-25 ch 10, | lol well it isnt him now, haha she's gotta believe he wont rob his own house.. thats just sad if he did. MAKE THEM KISS ALREADY haha, please update soon this story is great |
| CharismaticOutCry 2008-11-25 ch 10, | I really, really, really like this! It's awesome! And I only just found it... So no waiting for me! Until now... Now I'll have to wait for the next one. But oh no! Now Jay has been robbed! What's going on? Lol. Can't wait for the next update! Bye! |
| Jenn 2008-11-24 ch 10, | Wow, i couldn't really remember what happened.. but I'm glad you updated! |
| Essevera 2008-11-24 ch 10, | Ah, glad you finally updated. After huge gaps, it may be a good idea to put in recaps. |
| daling 2008-11-24 ch 10, | wow. |
| violet-eyez 2008-11-24 ch 10, | is jay an undercover cop? |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-11-24 ch 10, | haha when i got ur alert i was like " what story is this.. idk this story".. and i read the description and iwas like "OMGG YESS!" hahaha im glad u updated and i hope u updte again soon. |
| Impersonating Sugar 2008-11-24 ch 1, | Lol. Very amusing! I was laughing out loud and everyone in my class was giving me weird looks. I look forward to reading more. |
| jenjen-0 2008-11-24 ch 10, | Ah I remember this story...and it has been forever!! So as punishment you must update another 5 chapters :D |
| Endowment's Seraph 2008-11-24 ch 10, | I'm so glad you updated. This was great I hope you get back in touch with it so you can update again soon ~mel |
| AGarde 2008-11-24 ch 10, | OK I'm officially sitting at the edge of my seat. I love this story. Please update soon! :) |