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| shaggywolf 2007-06-12 ch 3,   | What, is everybody trying to be greek? just kidding. i really got to pay more attention. i really did not see this until just now. (the story, mind you) oh, don'r forget the common greek names like angelo and petro. (i know angelo sounds italian, but we all know that italians are wanna be greeks) one of my cousins is named Olympia. just throwen out ideas. romance already? you should have them hate eachother first, then when they findout more about eachother, then the romance gets kicken. the writing is perfect (or damn near close) and you catch attention and keep, so, so far, so good. write next chapter after you have finished EooD. author person/shaggywolf |
| ham337dd 2007-03-13 ch 1, | Interesting story. Please continue. |
| Inkypink 2007-02-14 ch 3, | Oho :D the romance is beginning, no? This is a great story so far, I do hope you continue. It's also great to find someone who can both write well and has good grammar and spelling. You must check you work pretty carefully before posting; that's ALWAYS a good thing! ...this is on my alerts! |
| Inkypink 2007-02-14 ch 2, | I'm surprised you haven't had more reviews by now. I'm really interested to see where this is going! From your summary it seems like paying through waitressing is not the only thing she'll have to do...hmm... |
| Inkypink 2007-02-14 ch 1, | You have a really neat writing style, and this beginning really makes me want to read more - you've gone straight into the story, always a good way to grab the readers' attention! Nice work. |
| Shadowelf11 2007-01-26 ch 3, | hey- nice work on this one, definitly developing a story line of its own, jumping into the romance pretty quick though. I love the setting, a beach with greek influences, very cool. keep it up, but im still waiting for ch 28 of elements of our days! |
| wilko4523 2007-01-26 ch 3, | plz plz plz continue lol this is so gd hugz sir wilko |
| mortediamore 2007-01-25 ch 2, | oh i like this *adds to favorite stories* looking forward to the next chapter... |
| Raleven 2007-01-24 ch 1, | hahahaha! I can't wait! (speaking of fluteness...hows the scanner coming along? XD) |
| Agent Raindrop 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Nice start! You've introduced the characters well and I'm interested to see how this turns out. Keep writing! |
| cbprice25 2007-01-24 ch 1, | I really like this first chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing this develop. |