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Reviews For: Shadows Roasting In The Fire: The Collection

melodramatic fool
2007-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abusei like this fic. it's funny *cheeky grin* i seriously wanna ruffle the whoever-the-"I"'s hair is. good luck trying to figure that sentence out dumdum! give the girl some OJ and she'll find her way! ojey!
LEDlorien7
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abusewow... that's... I don't know. Deep, I guess. Deeper than deep. I love the way it's written as a stream of consciousness that only covers a small period of time.

I love the repetition "What is home? Is there a home?" and "Sometimes I wish to be like them so I can also pretend. But I know the truth, even if it hurts."

The ending is really sad... *sniffle*
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