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| melodramatic fool 2007-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this fic. it's funny *cheeky grin* i seriously wanna ruffle the whoever-the-"I"'s hair is. good luck trying to figure that sentence out dumdum! give the girl some OJ and she'll find her way! ojey! |
| LEDlorien7 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusewow... that's... I don't know. Deep, I guess. Deeper than deep. I love the way it's written as a stream of consciousness that only covers a small period of time. I love the repetition "What is home? Is there a home?" and "Sometimes I wish to be like them so I can also pretend. But I know the truth, even if it hurts." The ending is really sad... *sniffle* |