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| Ilze09 2007-04-21 ch 1,   | Nice poem. I really like the title, it's so blunt and to the point but there's something about it that just draws my attention. I especially like the last line of the poem, it really puts the actions commited into perspective and really shows what has happened. Great poem, I only wish I could write like that. |
| Sophia Victoria 2007-01-27 ch 1, | That was some dark poem. You're such an expert at writing poems, I envy you:) x/ Hell Phoenix /x |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-01-25 ch 1, | "You killed me - I murdered you" that was cool. very cool. Dark thoughts, but the imagery made it super. Thanks for liking Always and Never =) |
| bitterlyysweetchoco 2007-01-25 ch 1, | Cool poem. Several little twists. (a little cliched in some areas look out for that.) But I think it's a good poem. |
| Maggot Blood 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Scary but oh so very awsome, good work. Wolf. |
| loveshouldnthurt 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Dark but still good!! |