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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-19 ch 1,   | Interesting start. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| lovefantasyworkreality 2008-03-19 ch 18, | This could wind up painful. I'm really looking forward to what happens next in the story. It feels like it's been an awfully long time since the last update. I'm also looking forward to Emerald kicking the boy's butts into next week. |
| lovefantasyworkreality 2007-12-23 ch 17, | So funny, once again. And also once again, poor Copo, the slapping dummy. Please keep pumping out the chapters like a... a ... something. A heart replacement pump, a water pump, whatever you want. Just keep pumping them out. |
| lovefantasyworkreality 2007-12-23 ch 16, | Another good chapter. I really cannot wait to see how this is resolved! |
| orangejello 2007-12-08 ch 16, | Yes, it is possible to tell when someonme else is writing, the style has a slight difference, but that makes for interesting reading. :] mmkay. this chapter (and the whole story I suppose, as I am much too lazy to review for each chapter) Poor pyro. Who has not been engaged in many pyromanic activities at all since the first chapter. My favorite character is a tie between Emerald and Hydro (I was about to call Hydro "Garrett"... sigh) How can one not like the children who hold almost complete power over their school? In both EPSE and Fine Line I am seeing some similarities. Pyro/Emerald and Cahome/Keiran, though not so much anymore, C/K have pretty much made up. also, Copo&Pyro/Charlie. Hydro/Garrett. And I'm almost positive in the earlier chapters of EPSE you mentioned something about "It's because you don't have swishy hair" and that made me chuckle. I end this gargantuan review with "You and your friends, from whose minds these engaging stories erupt, make me smile, and I look forward to more." Yay! |
| orangejello 2007-12-07 ch 15, | Whoa. About a year or so ago ish, I came upon this story and I laughed etc. etc. But never actually finished this installment. Now, after I have been a devoted follower of "Fine Line" I peruse thine profile and find that "GASP! she is indeed the same individual in EPSE!" and it pretty much made my day. :] |
| Nigel 2007-04-06 ch 8, | yay/ this made me happy. All you kiddos make me smile intensely, you have no idea. keep up thine good work, and if thee sees fit, update thine story soon! kthxbye! |