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Osunale 2007-01-24 . chapter 1
Lovely poem. "Preserved as a broken shard of glass,/drops of formaldehyde clinging, pearly" and "confined in frigid glass" are remarkable imagery. I love how beauty is pulled through the still coldness of the poem to create this ice-glass beautiful tragedy. Good work.
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