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Reviews For: little sin
Osunale
2007-01-24
ch 1, 		abuseThis one strikes as a bit ordinary, and doesn't read as well as your others. The bled-fed-led rhyming is quite excellent though: it isn't born of a forced structure, but pours through the work naturally. Not a bad piece at all.
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