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| Osunale 2007-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseExactly! I am just thrilled to pieces to see this...it's excellent in so many ways. First off, the structure and flow are a pure delight for the tongue: the lines simply fall off each other in brilliant pacing. I have to adore such phrasework as "black on white and white on red/from this world to/the other (and off you go) again" because it reads so well. |