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VELVETxKISSES
2007-02-02
ch 1,
abusei have to agree with you on this one; i was drawn by the title; and captivated by the words. thank you for writing amazing poetry. ^_^ mwah!
Osunale
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseThe themes of your poems aren't much different than typical teen angst/romance, but your words change everything. My difficulty is that I can't quite pinpoint just what it is that makes this stand out - it doesn't seem like it should be remarkable. But there's a subtle - I hate to call a poem poetic, but that's what it is - poetic tone that pulls me in. Good work.
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