Reviews for Mother of the Heir

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Ninavs 2008-11-05 ch 6,	Ok...I was loving this fic till NOW! WTF?! I thought he loved her...didn't he wait 2.0 years for her?! WTF?!?!? I really wanna turn back right now and never finish this story...too f.u.c.ked up in my opinion! =\
Sabreal 2008-10-24 ch 9,	"Hallmark", I muttered to myself, taking the card and flipping to the back so I could rip it open fashionably. "Oh, he thinks he's classy alright. Let's see here…" x That made me cry. Honest to god. With laughing so much. I mean he buys her a card that most people buy without blinking (maybe a bit exaggerated on my part) and here she is jumping to conclusions. And from the prev. chapter he was so far from classy than you can get. And to think a vampire BUYS hallmark. what a hoot. x "The UK's getting dangerous, you know." I looked at him then, wondering what he meant. Was the crime rate suddenly increasing? x Again this quote's really funny. i don't know why but it was H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S. x great writing! :D
Sabreal 2008-10-24 ch 8,	Ran into an old friend yesterday; Caught me by surprise when he called my name. He was a familiar face… from a chapter In my past. Is she talking about me?, he wondered wildly, not realizing his hands were flat upon the glass in nothing short of desperation. x that just made me crack up laughing. out loud. funny, funny, funny. i'm still loving this very much so.
Sabreal 2008-10-24 ch 3,	the first three chapters are great! i love it! so onto the fourth...
DarkestOfNights 2008-10-08 ch 28,	The suspense is killing me I wanna know what will happen already, I'm all giddy and nervous.I hope you update this story soon. Good luck writing it.
Grape 2008-09-25 ch 28,	This is awesome!! I really like this story so far, it seems like it is finally coming to a close. I hope that you finish the story soon, because otherwise I might just beat you. HAHA. Just kidding. But this is amazing, so please update soon!
Lapis Lazuli no Hana 2008-09-05 ch 28,	Oh! This story is so good! Update quick; I must see what happens next!
OhSweetheart 2008-08-11 ch 28,	Love this story, please update soon! I want to see what happens to Irune.
-undergroundlove 2008-08-07 ch 28,	this is so catching :D cant wait till the next chapter!
jayc3218 2008-08-03 ch 28,	i hope that you will update the story soon pplleaase i'm totally hook !
Plej 2008-08-03 ch 2,	I'm starting to like this story already, especially with Taeyler persona being so... I dunno, attitude like? Oh sassy. that is what I meant. I'm sleep deprived excuse me, lol.
akaCHEEKS 2008-07-20 ch 28,	dude, seriously. you need to update more often. the long intervals between your chapters, its making me confused. cause i feel like its dragging but its not. and i only feel like that cause i haven't been reading your story in a while only because there's not much updating. so he has no plans of giving her the kiss? but she's about to die right now.
rouquinamour 2008-07-15 ch 28,	well, that's a good place to become conscious, a night club :) pretty intense scene, between the rebel leader and Irune. I love how Constantine worries so much about her :) Aww... that stinks how his mother and father don't like her; but it makes sense, too, that they would wish that he would love a vampire... aww... what a sweet ending!
teegan 2008-07-10 ch 1,	as always you have written another great chapter keep up the good work i cant wait for the next chapter
Southern Siren 2008-07-09 ch 13,	Hey! great story so far I just wanted to correct something. You said "Vous montre juste votre dos, chienne" and I'm assuming you meant to say "you just showed me your back, " which is "vous venez de me montrer votre dos, chienne" or take out the "me" if you wanted to say "you just showed your back, ". I mean this as constructive help not an insult! I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

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