please continue soon

one tiny little detail: it's not "Jawol", but "Jawohl"

crap. reviewed wrong story! *very ashamed

persephone and hades are my fav. greek couple. so you just can't believe how estactic i was to find something somewhat about them.

i really like this story and the atmosphere it creates. keep updating. i'm only on the first chapter, but so far it's been awesome

Please please please update! I have been waiting for so long! I realy realy realy like thus story a lot! Please please please please please update it.

U have to update soon!

She stands up to him, but not when it really matters. She hates and complains about being treated like crap but again does nothing but voice her complaints every once in a while.

It's almost like a relationship between an abusive partner. But there is no love on her part keeping her there.

I'm sorry, I'm not trying to give a bad review but it probably seems like it.

It's the same thing over and over again. Just like another reviewer, I grew bored.

Again, I am sorry I have to say this. Because this is very well written. But the plot? I don't really know at this point.

Im Just Mlissundaztood

hey. please please please please finish this story! i have been reading this story nonstop and i realy realy wanna know what happens in the end! please! i'm begging you! oh and quick question. if he loves her so much, why does he keep abusing her? he didn't seem to treat her that way in her first life. so why now? that was the only thing i'm confused about... please PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I'M DYING OF CURIOSITY-ITIS. PLEASE! you havent' updated this story in almost a year and i totally bet other people are dying of curiosity-itis and incomplete-itis! PLEASE!

I really like this story. Please update!(insert desperate plea here)

Hey,

I really hope you get a chance to update again.

Thanks.

I LOVE this story! I just started reading it a couple of days ago and I am so distressed that it has been MONTHS since your last update! This is such a great story and I can only hope that you decide to update! PLEASE!
Please finish this, it's so GOOD!

...I got bored of the story. It was nice at first, but I suppose I kept waiting for something to HAPPEN, like a relevant, interesting progression in the plot. Something new was obviously trying to present itself in this chapter, but it didn't really interest me and the story seemed suddenly diverted away from what WAS interesting.

Nothing seemed to be changing in the slightest between Irune and Constantine. I got to really disliking Irune's character - it seems she's always willing to spout hateful words from her lips, but she never speak up about the way he's treating her despite that. She' always submitting to his bad treatment of her. It would be so much more interesting if she had a little more backbone, and not only stood up to him verbally but in her actions as well.

In my opinion it's something writers need to watch out for - Letting the main character get pushed around throughout the whole story by fate and by those around her. It makes for a much better story if the character's own actions determine her fortunes or misfortunes. Right now it's no fun reading about bad thing after bad thing, with the main character feeling hatred, and feeling sorry for herself, but not actually DOING anything about her situation.

I could say more, but I don't have time. I'm sorry to give a negative review, because I really DID enjoy the story at first, but that was when I had hope of interesting and exciting things happening. I sort of lost hope over the past several chapters, and though I'm sure as the story goes on it gets better, I no longer have the enthusiasm to read it all.

Despite all this, however, you're still quite a good writer! Plots and character development are difficult things to master, but since you write so much and so often, you are surely on the way to improvement. I hope you can find my feedback helpful in some way in the future, because I encourage you most definitely to keep writing! You have the promise of talent.

I don't understand - In her dreams (which I'm assuming are memories of the past)it seems as if Constantine really loves her. And yet in the present, he's so different. He's cruel, caring only for his own wants and desires and doesn't give a thought to what Irune wants. But if he really did love her, as he did then, then he would care about her and wouldn't treat her the way he's treating her now!

I'll read on, hoping for a good outcome to this. I'm hoping that present-day-Irune won't fall for him just because of her memories, discovering a different "side to him". Even worse would be her falling for Constantine because of his "sexiness" in the way she's responding to him already. I really wouldn't like either of those.

What I really want is for her to change him and for him to grow to REALLY love her again, rather than for Irune to simply accept the bad sides of him and grow submissive, leading to him treating her more gently and kindly.

Well, I guess I'll see! I really DON'T want to see her submit to him until he is kind, so I'll be disappointed if that happens. But I have the feeling that the story will be better than that, so I'll keep reading.

(And by the way, is there a Beauty and the Beast parallel in the story? The thought first occurred to me with the "I won't go to dinner with him" part. I hope it is - especially with the changing-him-from-heartless-and-selfish-to-kind part of Beauty and the Beast.)

Hello! I just started reading your story - I'm about to read the second chapter. I really like it so far! It's a bit predictable, but it's still an enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to the rest. I'll give a more detailed review later, once I've read more or have come to the end.

Keep going! I really like this. It's a unique vamp story, and I am sure you could get big bucks if you published it. You go, girl! :)