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smexisam 2008-04-04 ch 3,	awed i loved it :D update soon
Alexa'sAppleTree 2007-12-24 ch 3,	update-ness soon lol
Elle Winters 9 2007-05-23 ch 3,	hey this is relli relli good! dere so funny and sweet i like it.. update it soon!
jesslia 2007-05-13 ch 3,	can u update? please?
xjennnny 2007-04-28 ch 3,	OH!XD I LOVE THIS STORY! LOL PLEASE CONTINUE! UPDATE SON OR ILL JUST DIE! LOL JK XD
Lil_sis 2007-02-05 ch 3,	Yo. Good Chapter Sis. Be sure to write another one soon! :P
Susurrent Threnody 2007-02-02 ch 3,	You've got something here, and it's loaded with potential for the characters to mess up, fall in love, act stupid, be heroic, etc. This has a nice beginning. Remember to not rush the story, let it take it's own pace. Good job.
SxR Ninja 2007-02-01 ch 3,	I really like this chappy!! Okie now I understand about the whole 'Ria' thing... Cool. Well hope you update soon so I can R&R soon ks?
Crotch Rocket 2007-01-31 ch 3,	eww dont you hate girls like that? think that the popular people cant have friends who aren't. i know loads of 10th and 11th graders and they are popular cuz they are on the football and soccer teams, and i used to be on the team too. uhg the cheerleaders look at me like i have a 3rd eye when i talk with my friends, one even tried to make a nasty remark about my glasses, but then i cracked a Yer Face joke. it was hilarious, she walked away to the bathroom to "fix" her makeup. keep up the writing :]
LunaBela 2007-01-31 ch 3,	Hi, I have returned to bother once again. Loved the chapter. Loved the character development that has occurred with Bryan. It's great to know that Alex, aka Ria, can actually feel quite confortable with Bryan. I can actually see a great friendship, or maybe something even more, developing between the two. Oh, and thank you for clarifying why Josh had called Alex "Ria". Very well appreciated! Also, you're right (your A/N). Sometimes when one is writing, there are little mistakes that happen to slip our grasps. No biggy. I didn't see so many grammatical errors here, though. Well, as for me, I shall be waiting for the next addition to "Trips". I'll be waiting!! Ciao, for now! ~LunaBela~
stephy151 2007-01-31 ch 3,	Hi! Well I just wanted to tell you that I think this is a wonderful story! I like that it's not an over used cliche! Even though I'm a sucker for them! :) Who's not? Anyway! Great job with the story so far! Keep it up! I can't wait until the next chapter is up! Stephanie
moochacha 2007-01-31 ch 3,	cute
SxR Ninja 2007-01-30 ch 2,	Wow this is good I like it. Keep up, I wanna read more ^__^
LunaBela 2007-01-29 ch 2,	Hey! Back once again! I liked this chapter. Liked how it fills the reader in about Alex's life in school. As in, how no one other than her close friends know anything about her relationship with the Trips. I do have one question about this chapter, though: When Josh meets off with Alex by her locker, he calls her "Ria". Is this like a nickname, or what? Well, not that it's a big deal, just for clarification sakes. On the other side, I also found a very macroscopic amount of grammatical errors. They are nothing huge, though. No ones perfect, right? Other than that, everything else was in tact and fantastic, as usual. Well, as for me, I shall leave it here and study for my stupid Trig final (which I have tomorrow and instead of studying for it, I'm here reading your story . . . lol) Well, Ciao for now and until the next time!! ~LunaBela~
Preethy 2007-01-29 ch 2,	I love it!

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