Whoa. That first stanza is really powerful, especially how the last line just screams of misery. And the end was just perfect. This is an instant fav for me! I'm going to go check out your other poems now!

OMFG!Ookami-chan.This poem so rocked!

(Random note:The computer finally worked and let me return here.XD)

Gah!
Wonderful!
Its sad and pretty at the same time.
Kewl-Bone

Ohh, that's so sad. The title is very fitting. Glad things have changed for you. Always be positive! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^