Not a bad story. But there was that really long spot in the second quarter of the story that was like, all dialogue. I know you scattered some actions in there too to keep them from being talking heads, but it just seemed like a lot. The transition of time seemed a little rushed too. Things were going pretty well until you jumped ahead:

Touya was so caught up in the new sights and sounds around him that he didn’t notice the time flying by. Before he knew what happened it was eleven at night and decided to head back to the room.

I think you could explain some of the things that happened during that time, either in summary or scene. Or you could just cut it and throw a extra space, line, asterisk etc, to show that time passed without actually going into detail.

The characters are pretty intersting, I like Touya's level-headedness and his friend is kind of annoying, which is funny. Neil sounds like a support character who's there to help out in any ways he can. And I just love cute romances, I wonder who the black-haired, green-eyed girl was. And I have a feeling the boss/supervisor guy is going to be intersting. I can't wait to read the next chap.

As for your title, all I can say is that if you can think of a name for the inn, you can probably use it as a title. Doesn't need to be crazy fancy or funny. Unless you want it to be. But good luck with that heh.

I'm not gonna lie: considering I'm usually looking for some action/adventure stories, I mostly read this because I had a romantic comedy in my mind as well (not sure when I'll write though, since as usual my head is filled with other ideas and I already have two stories running ^_^'), but it was fairly good.
I like that maid girl (actually, I had a similar idea for the character) and Chris. The guy was funny (I guess every romance/comedy story based on manga gotta have some pervert :D).
A little miss was the fact that that maid apologized in English in stead of Japanese, considering it's a Japanese inn (same goes for that drunk).
The biggest problem I had was the fact that you only sacrificed some space to describe the girl, whereas everyone else is just a blank (meaning no idea how the look like). It's not a big deal ,but it's a little out of place to describe just one character and leave the rest to readers imagination.
Overall it was okay, though could be improved a bit. For the first chapter it was pretty interesting and makes the reader intrigued. I'll keep my out for this.
As for the title, I have no ideas, sorry. But if something good comes to my mind, I'll let you know.

wow^.^ very good so far and the idea is hilarious. just reading the summary got me into this one.