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| Kuroaisu 2007-08-28 ch 30,   | Tony, you're an supreme idiot for writing this in four frickin' months. but it's okay, i forgive you. *grins* this is Annie, by the way. from Mega? who goes to bronx sci? yea. |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-08-15 ch 133, | sorry i haven't reviewed for a while. I had school...in summer! How fun is that? XD |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-06-15 ch 130, | i wonder what happens next? XD |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-06-13 ch 127, | I wish i have a brother :( |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-06-06 ch 121, | can't wait for next chapter! XD |
| SirScott 2007-06-04 ch 55, | The flashback was interesting. Otoshiana has a high opinion of himself. ~SirScott |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-06-03 ch 118, | the beginnig sounds like a poem...alot of imagery...XD (had too much english lately -.-) |
| SirScott 2007-05-31 ch 54, | I liked the bold print effect at the end. I think Lance is wimpy, first battle out and he's getting beat up by a minor villian. The A1 poison reminded me of the A1 steak sauce. Hopefully, Rick will do better. ~SirScott |
| myonlyxxangel 2007-05-29 ch 12, | wow this is some really cool stuff! i had so much fun reading this its really thought out and intriging. (lol even tho thts probably not spelled right) keep updating, because u really have a talent for writing. I am actualy pretty new to this site, and i have a story called "Supernatural" that id really like if u cheched it out and maybe reviewed? once again, great job! |
| SirScott 2007-05-25 ch 53, | It would be strange to meet up with your child self again. I am not sure if any child would be happy with its adult counterpart. Lance does seem a little weak. ~SirScott |
| SirScott 2007-05-23 ch 52, | Wow, you really write long and detailed fights. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott |
| SirScott 2007-05-19 ch 51, | Robots and shapeshifters the action is starting to get intense again. Good job with this chapter. ~SirScott |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-05-18 ch 102, | that punch must hurt...alot...phew! that was a lot of reading!! XD |
| SirScott 2007-05-17 ch 50, | A lot of stuff covered in this chapter. I can see how Dylan would need more water seeing that he has the plant power. I think I know why Eric is hitting Mark, but I will have to read on to see if I'm right. ~SirScott |
| SirScott 2007-05-15 ch 49, | Lol. I didn't figure Derek's food supply would last with Dylan around. ~SirScott |