Tony, you're an supreme idiot for writing this in four frickin' months. but it's okay, i forgive you. *grins* this is Annie, by the way. from Mega? who goes to bronx sci? yea.

sorry i haven't reviewed for a while. I had school...in summer! How fun is that? XD

i wonder what happens next? XD

I wish i have a brother :(

can't wait for next chapter! XD

The flashback was interesting. Otoshiana has a high opinion of himself.

~SirScott

the beginnig sounds like a poem...alot of imagery...XD (had too much english lately -.-)

I liked the bold print effect at the end. I think Lance is wimpy, first battle out and he's getting beat up by a minor villian. The A1 poison reminded me of the A1 steak sauce.
Hopefully, Rick will do better.

~SirScott

wow this is some really cool stuff! i had so much fun reading this its really thought out and intriging. (lol even tho thts probably not spelled right)
keep updating, because u really have a talent for writing. I am actualy pretty new to this site, and i have a story called "Supernatural" that id really like if u cheched it out and maybe reviewed? once again, great job!

It would be strange to meet up with your child self again. I am not sure if any child would be happy with its adult counterpart. Lance does seem a little weak.

~SirScott

Wow, you really write long and detailed fights. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

Robots and shapeshifters the action is starting to get intense again. Good job with this chapter.

~SirScott

that punch must hurt...alot...phew! that was a lot of reading!! XD

A lot of stuff covered in this chapter. I can see how Dylan would need more water seeing that he has the plant power. I think I know why Eric is hitting Mark, but I will have to read on to see if I'm right.

~SirScott

Lol. I didn't figure Derek's food supply would last with Dylan around.

~SirScott