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| w-l-k 2008-04-02 ch 5, | Ohh, forget what I said in my review on "Light to Dark" this is an interesting turn. I sort of expected fear, maybe intimidation on the Pet's part while reading "Light to Dark" but this is different, I like the idea of her having 'feelings' for the master. It makes the relationship between them a bit more dynamic. In a way. Will there be a point beyond this, I mean both stories end up where the pet gets dragged back, is there more? Would be nice. Anyway Great Job! Wasn't quite what I expected, but lovely non-the-less. |
| AndAliceSays 2007-01-27 ch 2, | i think there's a typo in 'a companion to talk you' ..just a missing word or something? Other than that, i like. Again, lovely imagery. |
| Thrice 2007-01-27 ch 3, | oh... friccen awesome... expect an answer later lovey ^__^ |
| Inu-midoriko 2007-01-26 ch 2, | Heyhey, Good job on this one too ;P I like it lots. |
| Thrice 2007-01-25 ch 2, | oh very nice... i'm inspired... X3 |
| Inu-midoriko 2007-01-25 ch 1, | heyhey, good job on this XD It's really good and dark. What made you think of this? |
| Thrice 2007-01-24 ch 1, | ... no words... haha love it love it.. |
| AndAliceSays 2007-01-24 ch 1, | Lovely imagery. |