Reviews for Don't Leave Me Alone

Reviews For: Don't Leave Me Alone

x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-15 ch 1,	:sad silence: Oh. That's so sad, and so sweet... Sorry, beyond that I have nearly nothing to say. :(
Focaccia Bread 2008-02-11 ch 1,	I'm not an emotional person by far... and yet, your story still made me choke up. Success, I suppose, in garnering a reaction, eh? Very true emotions. I felt like an intruder, almost. Nice job. :) (or wait.. should that be ;.; lol)
In Darkest Night 2007-08-19 ch 1,	One: Cannot believe no one has reviewed before. Two: Where. To. Start. There is so much praise rattling about my brain, I can hardly make sense of them. From the beginning, this piece was proffesional and enjoyable. Tobias's tone of voice is a familiar (and amusing) dry, sarcastic, caustic tone. It develops his character in the mind, far more than a condensed sentance every could. Third: At first, I thought that maybe it would be Tobias dying, not his twin...But then we got our answer. I love how through his descriptions of her, she seems like a real live breathing person, as real as Tobias is to the mind. Especially with the connections you draw in by mentioning 'emo,' Hamlet, Shakespeare, the oh so familiar 'writing, drawing, in a corner' type, and of all things, a Health video. Fourth: It is so very much like a picture. A single moment of time in someones mind captured forever in words. Fifth: If this is just a short example of you're writing, I am very ** at myself for not finding you sooner. This was the most fun I've had reading a story in a LONG time...despite it's less than happy events.

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