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| Dante The Animelover 2007-03-16 ch 2,   | Nice Read I like it |
| Lyn-san 2007-03-08 ch 4, | Well, that was certainly interesting. Karyka's a dragon!! That's so cool, but i look forward to when she learns to cope with that voice in her head... yeah. well, ja ne! |
| Sovereign Chung 2007-03-08 ch 1, | It says I already reviewed for chapter 4 but..I didn't. xD Oh wells. Awesome chapter! Arika is a ** jesus h christ. Can't wait to see what you have in store =D |
| SGT. Baker 2007-03-05 ch 4, | Nice story. I really like where this is going, so keep up the good work! |
| Mecha019er 2007-03-04 ch 4, | yes a new chapter! i'm glad the you decided to work on this again. it's great, really i have no complaints i'm just hopping that you will comtinue this and see it to the end unlike most people |
| Mecha019er 2007-02-28 ch 3, | Hey i just finished reading your story and it is great. please come out with another chapter soon...plz |
| TheAngelofhope 2007-02-16 ch 2, | Good job on this. Keep it up. |
| Ice Princess Yukari 2007-02-16 ch 1, | To all my dedicated fans the next chapter will be out this weekend! I'll get it out as soon as possible! |
| Sovereign Chung 2007-02-16 ch 4, | I like the way you write :D I like your imagination too, and I'd like for you to just go ahead and put up the next installment so I can read. Kthnx x) |
| Lyn-san 2007-02-15 ch 1, | I'm loving this story. Please continue!! |
| Starlight-Sinagtala 2007-02-15 ch 1, | OMG please continue... I'm dying to read the next chapter |
| Sovereign Chung 2007-02-15 ch 3, | Please continue, it's so well written and so interesting. :) |
| slient-scream-of-pain 2007-02-05 ch 2, | I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU |
| CCgirlie 2007-01-25 ch 1, | Wow, this sounds really interesting, please keep writing on it. Only one suggestion, in the paragraph with the crystals exploding, young woman in the sentence "A hard blast of wind blew them over and washed over the young woman." Keeps making me think there is another woman in the room besides the woman in labor and the maids. I think this is because she is not referred to as a young woman before, so the description throws me. Other than that though, this is an awesome start to a promising story. CC |
| slient-scream-of-pain 2007-01-24 ch 1, | i love it i told you ,you where goo keep it up and never stop even when you think well that sucks keep going it is going good i love the frist bit love ya you-know-who no not that you-know-who |