i haven't read your review yet, but you are on! oh yes! hurry up. oh, did u ever read the georgia nicholson series? best ever.

i love this piece. its a bit twisted in a good way. i think it is amazingly depressing also in a good way. ...theres more i want to say but i blanked out gr but i love it. i wish i had written it thats how much i love it...yeah

Oh yeah. Got that? I've got an ending for YJ that doesen't mention I LOVE YOU whatsoever. Instead, here it is:

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ROSSI: I'm Roslyn. Not Rossi, not Roz and definitely not Rozzo. Also, I feel it's my duty to warn you, I tend to be a bitch.

BEAU: People call me Beau, and I've been told that I can, at times, be a broody bastard.

ROSSI: I think we'll get along just fine.

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I got to make a reason why she doesn't like being called Rossi. As for the Rozzo, that's Mr. 'I Wear Hot Pants' Halifax. Roz is Mr. De Luca. But throughout the story, Beau was calling her Rossi, and she was calling him Beaufort. When she was younger, everyone called her Rossi and so forth with Beau, but time went on, they changed, became different people, yaddayaddayaddayaddaya.

So yep, there's my whole clever ending at a way to avoid I LOVE YOU.

Oh, and I think I'm going to call her mother Garnish because I was looking at the damn Garnier Fructis in the bathroom, and I figured I'd take off the er and add sh. So yeah.

Kay, I'm off to get ready for the hell hole called work. See ya

This is twisted

i love it

I came and checked your stuff out after you reviewed my story the other day, and I have to say that this was one of the most delightfully depressing things I've read in a while. I loved it. And I don't even like poetry.

hay, meester purpal peeple eeter. mi speeling sooks. jaja. aye neads two geht sturted ohn rowahn's parht, butt mi wrighting sooks l8tely. aye myte tri n cheme clase todaye, ploos, mi reeders r gowing 2 lyench mi iffe aye doen't oopdate soone.


AYE EM FLAEMING U DOD! HOWE CANNE U WRIGHT SUMTHING SOW STOOPID?? DIS ES DUH DUMMEST TING AYE'VE EVA REED. STOOPID FEECTIONPURSE WRIGHTER. AYE H8 YU. NANANEENENENENEN. GESH U SHULD JOOST DYE.

Anyway, I think you should know I want you to die because you made Rowan's reaction all the most harder. I think I'm going to enjoy writing Beast, the evil feline, the most, but I don't have much time. My classes have decided to assign 10 pages papers each, and they're due within the next two weeks, but hey, I guess I can always procrastinate.

I had the coolest song in mind, but I forgot what it was about, so haha. I was inspired by a word, but I lost the word. Maybe I'll write about diapers, I had the weirdest conversation the other day. I mean the guy, was worse than me. Haha. We should have invited him to join the freaks.

I need to get ready, so have fun in Japanese. I don't have to go to Japanese or Stats, so hahahahahahahahahahahahah. Bye-Bye!

Peekaboo sends a dung bomb.

I'm not here to plug the bathtub. mo. i put like five o's just so you know. fictionpress cuts them off.

Because we didn't get any reviews on HTCAL I exported chappy #1 then uploaded the export as chapter two and then deleted chapter 1 so it wouldn't be on the second page and more people would view it. i'm way smart, but it deleted the page hits, but i remember we had 25 if that makes you feel any better.

I can't think of much else. the only reason i'm up at 8 on my break is so i could check reviews. poor Rowan. no one wants to comment on her psychoticness, and sonny doesn't get to inform anyone about his weed.

and you're the only weirdo that reviews an author's note. yeah, that's right. i called you a weirdo. weirdo. weirdo.

but you're a perfect weirdo. haha. peekaboo can be your stalker. by the end of the week, or whatever, i'll try to get your poem up to ten reviews, although i'm gonna laugh at who decides to be nosy and read them.

I've decided to harass you through a review just to fill up your review box. Oh yes, I bumping the reviews. Haha. Evil...

You changed your profile, and it took me like ten minutes just to figure out that it wasn't in Russian. then it took me another ten to read the damn thing because my head hurts.

Do I have to put you on a guilt trip just to get you to write something? haha. Dude, you're suposed to be doing japanese, not reviewing.

Oh, and sh. You don't point out my mistakes. sh. haha. you're supposed to praise me and then take over the world with your spiffy japanese.

I've come up with a new take over plan. It's awesome, but unfortunately all of my teachers like stalked my myspace page, so I have to completely revise it. What country do you want?

Canada, except the French speaking part is taken, so is Estonia, Columbia, Jamaica, Gambia, England, Italy, and I think that's it, but Mike is trying to vie for China. hah, as if.

Dude, Sonny is like beating the insides of my brain out. I have the most horrible urge to write him. My god, do you know what it's like to have a pervert in your head, along with a bimbo?

Advertising your email like that will get you nowhere but with a sonny wannabe. haha. freaks are fun to talk to.

Alrighty, I'm done spamming, but if I end up writing something in sonny's pov, you can't kill me. haha.

should we do the whole you write one chap and then i write another? we might get done faster instead of waiting on the person to finish, but then it has to be planned, so we're both screwed. i still think we should do a weirdo spinoff and hook up ginger and sonny in a crappy cliche where they get married in vegas and ginger is a showgirl, and sonny is her pimp. haha.

Oh ya, since this is an anonymous review, you can delete it, but posting a review is much more interesting than an email.

wow, this is intense
suicide attempt [succeeded?] with the sister watching?
it's pretty good
haha, and i noticed you write kind of like i do

Wow...after reading those 15 things you can do wat Walmart when your family takes their own sweet time (which was extremely funny) you have this poem which is so freaky, scary, and cool at the same time and sad. Ouchie, it's like...perfect.

thats a really good poem. morbid, but good. on a side note, i love your "Things to do in K-Mart" thing. i want to try the condems one. ha. but yea, you write really well.

You finally posted something!

Lordy, didn't realise you were so suicidal. Nah, sometimes I like to pretend I'm emo and write poems. Yeah, some of them are pretty screwed up.

I like this, but I think when you said splatters, it should be spatters. It's called blood spatter, not splatter.

Wow. . . thats's descriptive. Very nice poem.


x/ Hell Phoenix/ x

Great piece, well expressed. Keep writing.

~Anna~ ^_^