Reviews for Shadows of the Light

Wakka02 2007-03-24 ch 3,	Now I remember. Vladmir's Offering from DotA. Dots. -.- I see you got up a new chapter, although I still think it's too colloquial. Oh well. Have fun writing.
ch3d 2007-02-16 ch 1,	very creative and imaginative :)great use of descriptive words -paints a vivid picture. punctuation (less commas) could be improved...as well as sentance structure
Wakka02 2007-02-03 ch 2,	Hallo. Interesting story, although I seem to remember the name Vladmir from somewhere.. I think your dialogue is too OOC and overly influenced by the way you yourself speak. Hahs. Otherwise not too bad.
aeshma 2007-01-25 ch 1,	Good introduction, and thanks for the background info, atleast now I won't be confused when you dive deeper into the story.