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| dangelicessence 2007-09-18 ch 1,   | Beautiful imagery. I can see it all in my mind's eye and it's lovely if a bit desolate picture. |
| Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2007-09-04 ch 1, | I love the scenery in this poem I can picture her very well from your wording and the resolution has that comforting feel I love the broken sentence feel that each line gives to those above and below it very nice its going on my favorites and I'll keep an eye out for future stuff too. |