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Reviews For: Behind the Facade

Carmel March
2007-05-10
ch 1,
That was simply amazing. It flowed, and though it was personal, I could also relate. Good job on this!

~carm~
Raelia
2007-02-05
ch 1,
This seems a little confusing, but I really like parts of it. I found a typo if you care to edit it. You wrote: "Where we see noting but ourselves..." I think you meant 'nothing'. Other than that, I thought this was pretty good.
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