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| Carmel March 2007-05-10 ch 1, | That was simply amazing. It flowed, and though it was personal, I could also relate. Good job on this! ~carm~ |
| Raelia 2007-02-05 ch 1, | This seems a little confusing, but I really like parts of it. I found a typo if you care to edit it. You wrote: "Where we see noting but ourselves..." I think you meant 'nothing'. Other than that, I thought this was pretty good. |