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| under the influence 2007-05-22 ch 16,  | abuseAw...that was cutesy...what would make a good sequel is if Gabe had this mysterious disease/disability... |
| SirWade 2007-05-22 ch 16, | abuseYAY! Gabe awoke! :D :D I loved the part with Demetra/Gabe and I can't wait to read the epilogue! :D Your idea for a sequel sounds great too!! :D :D |
| under the influence 2007-05-22 ch 15, | abusewhat happens now? |
| under the influence 2007-05-22 ch 13, | abuseViola is slick...I like that :) |
| under the influence 2007-05-22 ch 12, | abuseI liked the dramatic turn the story took...one thing that you need to watch out for is the way you spell 'Sarah'. Every time you write it, it changes... |
| Goon1117 2007-05-11 ch 15, | abuseDamn girl. That was good. I can't believe Elliot was dead. Man...I wonder what he was thinking. I mean seriously what was he thinking? He could of let her go and ran away. Poor guy dead...RIP Elliot. Great job. Is Viola going to be okay? I was in class and gasped and everyone looked at me wondering why I was so shocked. It was kick ** and I can't wait for more! Keep going =] |
| SirWade 2007-05-03 ch 15, | abuseSo, he's gone...hm...Wonderful chapter!! Girls rock! Viola was amazing!! I can't wait to read the last few chapters(although it will be kind of sad...)! Please UPDATE SOON!! :D :D |
| Goon1117 2007-04-26 ch 14, | abuseoh **! I'm so nervous on what's going to happen next. GO VIOLA! The funny thing made me think of your story. My mom went on a small date with this man named Elliot. He really annoyed me and was a know it all. lol. made me think of your story. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO AN UPDATE! |
| SirWade 2007-04-24 ch 14, | abuseAh! That was much too suspenseful for my tastes! What happened to Gabe? Is he going to be all right? And what about Viola(she's so great!!)? |
| under the influence 2007-04-17 ch 6, | abuseThat seemed a tad...uncalled for...and a bit rushed... |
| under the influence 2007-04-17 ch 4, | abuseI like it so far...it just seems very surface-y (yeah, I know that's not a word)...more detail would be helpful...but I'm only on chapter 4, so we'll see what happens in the upcoming chapters :) |
| Goon1117 2007-04-16 ch 13, | abuseNice nice! Finally! Viola is so smart! Elliot is so stupid! lol Glad your updated!! Waiting for more ^^ |
| Leila- To lazy.......... 2007-04-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseYAY! A love this story!! Thanks for updating! I ADORED the part with Elliot and Demetra! And Viola's so smart! Please UPDATE SOON! :D |
| Goon1117 2007-04-03 ch 12, | abuseAmazing story. I read the whole thing and was amazed by it. Sure it was a little slow at first but then it turned kick ** and came all into plan when she broke up withe Gabe. POOR GABE! I had to walk away from the computer because I was upset that he got shot. Ugh! Stupid Elliott! lol Amazing story! |
| SirWade 2007-03-13 ch 12, | abuse:( :( :( :( It's too sad! But you did another wonderful job! This chapter was awesome! Although it was lacking Demetra!! Please UPDATE SOON! :) p.s. I loved the last line too! :) :) :) |