Aw...that was cutesy...what would make a good sequel is if Gabe had this mysterious disease/disability...

YAY! Gabe awoke! :D :D I loved the part with Demetra/Gabe and I can't wait to read the epilogue! :D Your idea for a sequel sounds great too!! :D :D

what happens now?

Viola is slick...I like that :)

I liked the dramatic turn the story took...one thing that you need to watch out for is the way you spell 'Sarah'. Every time you write it, it changes...

Damn girl. That was good. I can't believe Elliot was dead. Man...I wonder what he was thinking. I mean seriously what was he thinking? He could of let her go and ran away. Poor guy dead...RIP Elliot.

Great job. Is Viola going to be okay? I was in class and gasped and everyone looked at me wondering why I was so shocked. It was kick ** and I can't wait for more! Keep going =]

So, he's gone...hm...Wonderful chapter!! Girls rock! Viola was amazing!! I can't wait to read the last few chapters(although it will be kind of sad...)! Please UPDATE SOON!! :D :D

oh **! I'm so nervous on what's going to happen next. GO VIOLA!

The funny thing made me think of your story. My mom went on a small date with this man named Elliot. He really annoyed me and was a know it all. lol. made me think of your story.

I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO AN UPDATE!

Ah! That was much too suspenseful for my tastes! What happened to Gabe? Is he going to be all right? And what about Viola(she's so great!!)?

That seemed a tad...uncalled for...and a bit rushed...

I like it so far...it just seems very surface-y (yeah, I know that's not a word)...more detail would be helpful...but I'm only on chapter 4, so we'll see what happens in the upcoming chapters :)

Nice nice! Finally! Viola is so smart! Elliot is so stupid! lol

Glad your updated!! Waiting for more ^^

YAY! A love this story!! Thanks for updating! I ADORED the part with Elliot and Demetra! And Viola's so smart! Please UPDATE SOON! :D

Amazing story. I read the whole thing and was amazed by it. Sure it was a little slow at first but then it turned kick ** and came all into plan when she broke up withe Gabe.

POOR GABE! I had to walk away from the computer because I was upset that he got shot. Ugh! Stupid Elliott! lol

Amazing story!

:( :( :( :( It's too sad! But you did another wonderful job! This chapter was awesome! Although it was lacking Demetra!! Please UPDATE SOON! :)

p.s. I loved the last line too! :) :) :)