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| SapphireIris 2007-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseAw, sweet! I don't understand some of it, but I do speak basic Spanish, and I like the imagery. "And I listen to the songs of angels..." very nice. Thank you, spanish I! This reminds me of another poem I read, "Yo soy un hombre sincero, donde crecian las palmas..." There's more I can't remember, but the gist is the same. Excellent structure. 10/10. -SapphireIris |
| Kahn the Hun 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abusey me dijiste que no estabas bien en espanol. Mentirosa. Una poema muy bonita. Yo vi la luz entro de ti. Bien trabajo! |