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| in a jar pk 2007-01-26 ch 1,   | pretty words. x |
| les petits bateaux 2007-01-25 ch 1, | in love with the last line. just lovely, and hauntingly saccharine. |
| perdita 2007-01-25 ch 1, | miss miss i love the ending. |
| lackluster 2007-01-25 ch 1, | i don't know why but i see this as symbolic and that makes it even better for me. "her faded collarbone" that is the most interesting image, i have to say. i love it. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-01-25 ch 1, | Interesting words, good imagery, an unusual poem. Keep writing, Alan. |