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| she smolders 2008-02-18 ch 1,   | The second-last line of this is powerful. Your way of writing is different from what I usually read but this piece struck a chord in me - the language you use is gorgeous in its own way. Take care. |
| Odds In Favor. 2007-05-14 ch 1, | Nicely done! Reminds me of own of my own works with how you used the words "stagnant" and "pickaxe" in one poem. Guess they work well. ^^ I love the title-- it's what brought me to read it in the first place (other than to return your review,) very creative and imaginatively abstract. |
| Palms and Fingers 2007-01-26 ch 1, | Yes it is. Now shut up already. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-01-25 ch 1, | Your style is an odd one, the way you word your work is interesting and graphic; senseless in a way, an entertaining way. I must remember to read some more of your work, it has a feel to it I cannot put a finger on. Nice poem, Alan. |