Reviews for The Devil's Weapon

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morbid-scribbles 2007-05-19 ch 1,	Very well written, I'm glad to put it into my C2. :) Sorry it took so long to get back to you. :)
Kase-dog 2007-05-06 ch 3,	Interesting little dream sequence. Some nice forshadowing done there. I'm hooked and looking forward to reading more of this soon! Awesome job!
Kase-dog 2007-05-06 ch 2,	ACK! falls out of her chair What the heck?! What a place to leave it! Guess it's a good thing there's another chapter to read, huh? lol
arirang 2007-05-01 ch 3,	Mm I liked the dream a lot. This demon...it would be CRAZYAWESOME for a demon hunter like Kimiko fall in love with a demon! I'm liking the story so far, but I think the readers know very little about Kimiko so far. Meh, there's hardly anything to go on, three chapters, I know, but I hope to see some character depth coming up :P
Dragonslostchild 2007-04-30 ch 1,	Sorry I took so long to get back to you on this. APs are coming up and driving me crazy... I don't even have time to read the second chapter of this 'cause I've gotta leave in about two minutes for school. sigh I'll be sure to check it out, though, 'cause it seems pretty good so far. Your ability to write out interesting and eye-catching battles is definitely something to be envied. I'd be happy to add you to my C2. Oh, and it's kind of weird that you suggested we're similar- my myspace display name used to be "Writ3rgirl"... not exactly the same as your name but pretty close, lol. I'll write back with a more detailed review for the second chap later, and please check out the other fics in our C2. Inyo's pretty good. (Of course, mine sucks. :P ) DLC
Ds14 2007-04-23 ch 2,	I like the character building in this chapter. You show the main character's personality and their way of talking through believable dialogue and then show Saruwatiri's as well. The cliffhanger ending was also very well done. Hope to see a new chapter some time soon. :-D
arirang 2007-04-03 ch 2,	What?! You killed him off?! I'm deducing from the whole demonic power thing, his "Father's coming for me" quote, and then his death that he's Satan's son or the like. FEO sounds really rich, to say in the least, kind of like the Incredibles thing where the security and technology was crazy. And that doctor girl sounded fishy. Yup, I read the reviews and noticed most people said stuff about flow. I reread the last chapter and liked both. ^^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Cya then! (P.S. Saruwatiri has a crazy name--but anyway, he kinda reminds me of Rock Lee. Hehe.)
AlopexLagopus 2007-02-24 ch 1,	Well, as much as I gotta say this reminds me of Bleach, I loved reading this story and I'm definately waiting for you to write more! ;)
truthordeal 2007-02-10 ch 1,	Your story definately has potential. Of course it needs some fine tuning and work, but then again, whose doesn't?
Kase-dog 2007-02-01 ch 1,	Intriguing...I like this thing so far! I look forward to reading more of this!
Yukigami 2007-01-31 ch 1,	Hello there! Finally got to reading this after your request and I am thoroughly impressed. This story has everything we're looking for in the Holly Cirlce. The only thing that is currently preventing me from adding it is it's length (the rule is that the story needs to be at least half way done or the first chapter needs to be over 20 words). When you update, however, I'll happily add it to the Holly Circle. On that note, I'm adding you to my personal favorites and alerts lists :P Please keep writing and update soon!
Dice Darwin 2007-01-30 ch 1,	Well, this is good so far. The action was serviceable and the plot seems to be pretty interesting at this point. There's some flaws that come to mind, but nothing too bad at the moment.
Royal Bliss 2007-01-28 ch 1,	This was a little strange but interesting nonetheless. From reading this it kind of seemed a little rushed and the adjective usage kind of took away from the story. "The demon was bulky, large, and black with red streaks across its bowling ball of a stomach." I don't think you should really have all of that in one sentence, it's kind of elementary. It'd be better if you somehow slipped those in gradually so it's not just suddenly there. It reminded me a little of how sometimes young writers start describing their characters in the firs paragraph. I know this particular demon isn't that important but I think you could do a little better on it. Here are some other minor things that aren't really important but I thought I'd point them out: "I need for you to report back at the headquarters.” Instead of having "at" in there, it'd sound better to have "to" in it's place instead. "It quickened her heart beat" Heartbeat is one word. Sorry for being annoying, I just saw that. Anyway, this does have some potential and it is pretty good for a start. -Rab
Yoi 2007-01-26 ch 1,	WOO, i see great potential in your story! Update fast! Can't wait to read on! ^^ Love ya writing style too!
Trazia 2007-01-26 ch 1,	OMG! That is one of the best stories i have read please hurry and update. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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