Interesting how it focused on her but went o the main reason she is expressing her emotions. telling how she hides from everyone, hoping not to be noticed. Makes a good explaination on the author. yet only knowing how she is scared to let people know she is there. While protecting a crush and without anyone's suspicions. tells us how she will do anything for the ones close to her heart. How she wishes he wil notice her so she can stop hiding. very personal poem, think she needs to express herself in person not a piece of paper. opening up helps people like u even more..

its realy good. like that one person you want to see just all that you do for them never seems to look your way . yeah i liked it alot.

That's deep. Sometimes you wish the right person would be able to SEE you at least just once.
It was really good. Hope you write more! ;p

T_T how sad! is she gonna die? no you can't kill her! she's too cute!

*ahem* I have now gotten a hold of myself. ^_~

This is good, though I'm not entirely sure if it should be classified as a love poem. Seems too angsty. But that's just my opinion. You can ignore it if you want.

This is good!
I like it.

One question, though...how do you booby trap a school desk?