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| joie.avion 2007-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. :) I like the theme of moving on. One point that threw me off was the fact you switched between tenses -- i.e., past and present. Is this intentional? It seems it. Anyways, great job. You have more than potential. Have a great weekend! |