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| Arej 2007-06-12 ch 2,   | ...wow, I was in such a rush to get on last time I forgot my sign-off. Anyway...the names bit seems different. Names as something unusual...that's rare. At least to me. It's a good angle, I like it. Anyway...*pouts* Is there anymore? I hope there's more. *sniffles* Your fans await you! BB-Arej |
| Arej 2007-06-12 ch 1, | I -really- should have gotten to your work sooner. But here I am, laid up again, and it's the most perfect opportunity in the world to review. So...yes. And I chose the one with zippo reviews because I'm a reject like that. *grins* Anyway...I like the opening. Especially the butterflies bit...makes it more real. Almost adultish, like an adult talking, which is apparently what you were going for...I like it. Not much else to say...next chapter! |