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Reviews For: Sometimes You Can't Make It On Your Own

LightningStruckBlackDog
2007-07-24
ch 11,
yess finally! an update! and as always...LOVED IT!
LightningStruckBlackDog
2007-07-17
ch 10,
AACK!
i can NOT believe you have only 2 reviews for this... cause this is AWESOME!my GOD, i LOVE this! i love Muse, and i love Harry Potter, and i love Pink Floyd. so you can pretty much see why i love this.
but ah, this is AWESOME!
UPDATE ASAP BEFORE I KILL MYSELF! lol.
ok,no,really,UPDATE!
Daray Gunda
2007-07-15
ch 5,
Hi there!

I hope you don't take this as a flame:

I'm sorry, but I just couldn't connect with the story, but I'm not criticising your abilities as an author.

Your abilities as an author is fine- especially with capturing expressions- sometimes some authors go overboard with the description and whatnot, but you seem to have not done so.

I hope I can see another story of yours with a plot that I can connect with a lot better.

Good luck with this story!
allgoodthings
2007-02-23
ch 8,
i like it! er i haven't really got anything important to say, but update soon!
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