 LightningStruckBlackDog 2007-07-17 . chapter 10AACK!
i can NOT believe you have only 2 reviews for this... cause this is AWESOME!my GOD, i LOVE this! i love Muse, and i love Harry Potter, and i love Pink Floyd. so you can pretty much see why i love this.
but ah, this is AWESOME!
UPDATE ASAP BEFORE I KILL MYSELF! lol.
ok,no,really,UPDATE! |
 Daray Gunda 2007-07-15 . chapter 5Hi there!
I hope you don't take this as a flame:
I'm sorry, but I just couldn't connect with the story, but I'm not criticising your abilities as an author.
Your abilities as an author is fine- especially with capturing expressions- sometimes some authors go overboard with the description and whatnot, but you seem to have not done so.
I hope I can see another story of yours with a plot that I can connect with a lot better.
Good luck with this story! |