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| LightningStruckBlackDog 2007-07-24 ch 11, | yess finally! an update! and as always...LOVED IT! |
| LightningStruckBlackDog 2007-07-17 ch 10, | AACK! i can NOT believe you have only 2 reviews for this... cause this is AWESOME!my GOD, i LOVE this! i love Muse, and i love Harry Potter, and i love Pink Floyd. so you can pretty much see why i love this. but ah, this is AWESOME! UPDATE ASAP BEFORE I KILL MYSELF! lol. ok,no,really,UPDATE! |
| Daray Gunda 2007-07-15 ch 5, | Hi there! I hope you don't take this as a flame: I'm sorry, but I just couldn't connect with the story, but I'm not criticising your abilities as an author. Your abilities as an author is fine- especially with capturing expressions- sometimes some authors go overboard with the description and whatnot, but you seem to have not done so. I hope I can see another story of yours with a plot that I can connect with a lot better. Good luck with this story! |
| allgoodthings 2007-02-23 ch 8, | i like it! er i haven't really got anything important to say, but update soon! |