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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-10-05 ch 21,  | abuseFantastic story! xx |
| MurtaghSonOfMorzan 2008-08-31 ch 21, | abuseGreat Story! ^^ It was funny, Sad and scary at parts, AWESOME! ^^ Good Luck! ^^ |
| ukranianmira 2008-07-30 ch 21, | abusebloddte hell this is totle bulaz im getting kicked off before i can read part 2:( but its 12 and im only 11 so but ya and btw im not engilsh i just felt like doing that cuz i was bored lol and now u pro think im some wried person but what ever i love ur story and good night :) |
| Lilchany 2008-07-19 ch 21, | abusereally cute story, sometimes it was really sad but in the end turned out good :) |
| utfan23456 2008-06-16 ch 21, | abuseaw great story! |
| Aynn 2008-04-06 ch 21, | abuseI love happy endings! I just read straight through the story; so much for sleep tonight. I was nervous about the way the story was heading. I tend to drop stories that deal with abuse; I just can't deal with it. But, you dealt with the topic in a way that I felt was relatively easy to handle as a reader but still got the seriousness of the situation across. There were a few typos/missing words here and there. But, overall awesome story. Kudos to you! I look forward to seeing the sequel! |
| AMM3485 2008-04-02 ch 21, | abuseI loved the sarcasm in this story! Great Job! |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-23 ch 21, | abuseEpilogue= hilarious! Story=fabulous! That sums it all! Off to read the sequel! Woot! XoXo NAN! |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abusei like it! :) |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 16, | abusethe ending to this chapter is really good. thanks again for posting |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 14, | abusethis is getting sad. I hope she gets away soon. ps- I feel really detached from Christain's point of view. he doesn't do anything evil in front of us, so i don't feel that much hatred toward him as I would if i witnessed the abuse. We never see anything, yet, just posessivness. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 13, | abuseaww. i feel for little andy! poor abandoned thing. great work |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 10, | abusei hope christain is gone soon. thanks for posting |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 9, | abuseyay. I really like James. I hope things go well between them and nothing too bad happens around Andy's b day |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-08 ch 7, | abuseI wonder if he is a cop or something too...probably not since he is only 20. |