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SilverApocalypse 2008-03-24 ch 1,	1. Wow 2. Ye - although, we don't really use this word anymore, what with it being archaic and all, I must say that it fits this poem really well. 3. The first three lines - priceless 4. The last three lines - I can understand why you felt free after writing this. 5. I didn't get the chance to comment on this before but, love the penname.
pixiepoptartz 2007-08-11 ch 1,	#1. HI #2. I agree with another reviewer that the line: "And laugh at all the people who thought, We belonged in Heaven," is AMAZING.! I lovelovelove it, just like the rest of the poem!
Jess Angel 2007-05-26 ch 1,	An awesome piece of writing. I may not share the ideas, but it pacts a powerful punch. The irony was well done. Concise, clever, and just on. Thanks for another wonderful read. Write on! Jess 0:o)
It's Whatever. 2007-03-17 ch 1,	"And laugh at all the people who thought, We belonged in Heaven," Amazing.
Grayhome 2007-01-29 ch 1,	Coincedentally, I just wrote a picture-book story called "Spinario's Deity Dilemma" about a dragonfly willing to go to Hell so that he doesn't have to sacrifice his freedom. It reminds me of the myth of Prometheus, because the narrator seems willing to endure divine punishment if it means he's allowed to be free.
FUCK ME ARSE 2007-01-26 ch 1,	God hates you for this.
Project 2007-01-25 ch 1,	There's a subtle, or maybe not so subtle, irony about this piece. "Godspeed all ye Hell-bound" struck me this way particularly. The last two lines seem to be comparison and overall conclusion of the poem, saying that those who sacrifice theirselves give those others a chance to live a more alternative afterlife in Heaven, I guess. I can take this many ways, but I'll spare you the series. :P Also, I have current writes in submission process and submitted status already, please look over, and perhaps review, if your schedule permits. Thanks. :)

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