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Reviews For: Dying Youth
VelvetSea 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
And you call MK and Dani's stuff depressing? lol. Another powerful one, this time almost making me cry. (grr...lol) going on favs.
R. Louise 2007-02-01 . chapter 1
Wonderful in it's darkness. When I read this aloud, the rhythm felt like a weight. I will forever wonder how you accomplished that.
Wolf's Night 2007-01-26 . chapter 1
ok and you say my poems depress you! geez this one's sad! good but still sad.
Dani P 2007-01-25 . chapter 1
wow...Alexis showing her depressed side. ha now u can't make fun of mk and me anymore. really goodo though fav line (well one of them):
"Family cries
Is it wrong I wish to die
Blood count low
Heart rate slow"

cept you need a question mark in the second line (gasp! im giving you grammar advice!)
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