This story was so powrful! So much feeling, so well-written! Truly a great story! This will go in my favorites! Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade

This was cool! I liked how you wrote the girl's feelings through the fic, and how it all changed at the ending. This was well-written and easy to imagine. Great job!
The Reverse Edge Blade

Well written and intriguing. The first part starts more like an essay and the second part is like a story. So there is a little bit of a disconnect as far as writing styles go between her meeting with Jesus/God and her meeting with Satan.

Besides that, I liked it. I can see a long story coming from this, but I see you already posted part 2 and that this is complete.

wow awesome story idea, excellently written.