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| foreverxtwilight 2007-07-24 ch 10,   | Poor Timmy! Really, is anything good going to happen to him? lol. Hm, i wonder if Kim lied about liking Bastion. |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-05-08 ch 9, | lmfao...thats rich. new characters ...yummy. update soon! |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-04-24 ch 8, | I'ts totally understandable, school is important. I really shouldn't be reading right now but i saw that you updated and got really excited. This chapter is very emotional and it definetely shows the progression of Tim's relationship with Kim and how he feels about her and their relationship. |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-03-31 ch 7, | It's a me Mario. Haha just kidding. Wow, this chapter was very very eventful. Is it true what Sulvan said about Kim's father? Hm, i wonder. Update soon! |
| nemivicious 2007-03-22 ch 6, | I think I picked up on the foreshadowing! I won't say anything though because if I'm wrong it'll be a bit embarassing. Anyway, this is great as I think I've mentioned and update it. Like, now. |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-03-19 ch 6, | Foreshadowing eh? Sorry that this will be brief but i should be doing homework right now lol. Hm, well i kinda picked up on the fact that either Kim has a past with Mr.Sulvan or that she will have a future and i'm looking forward to finding out which one it is. Poor Timmy. Update soon! ^ ^ I'll check your reply on dev art. Fanks. |
| nemivicious 2007-03-15 ch 5, | This is really good, I like it very much and I'm looking forward to seeing the continuation. I like Kim. |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-03-11 ch 5, | lol, i should have expected that from kim, the pizza thing. hey whats the name of the song? i found the band but i don't know which song you're talking about. another thing, i think that maybe if you allowed anonomyous reviews you would have more of them cause the truth is that people are too lazy to log in and to register to the site. alrighty, update soon dahling! |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-03-08 ch 4, | This chapter is my favorite so far! I can't wait for the trip. You deserve so many more reviews! Update soon! |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-02-24 ch 3, | I don't like Kim's mother. Why can't she work and support herself? She's the mother! But i guess she's too busy getting high. Poor Kim. Update soon! |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-02-10 ch 2, | This story is really good,like nothing i've ever read before. Please update soon! |